Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Revisions

My two strengths: I am able to provide clear vivid descriptions about visuals as they appear in the story. I am also very comfortable with creating realistic dialogue and weaving it into my narrative in a balanced fashion.

My two weaknesses: I sometimes stray from the main focus of my paragraph, going off on a tangent that only makes sense to me. I sometimes get a little too long winded, relying on a style that is used in novels, rather than short stories, as a result I end up rushing through some sections and devoting too much time to others.

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